Re: CHRONO, ryuuk

[Aang]

They deleted their post and account so this is being moved to Denied Profiles...

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History:

before she had died of an opium overdose.

That just doesn't sound like something from the Avatar Universe to me... could you change it to something more avatar-like? Please.

Ryuuk’s life really started changing when she went to the Earth Kingdom for the first time and was taken to the palace, where she met Azula.

I'm confused. The Earth Kingdom palace where she met Azula? Since this is from the beginning of the series, Azula is still in the Fire Nation and I don't think she's ever been to any Earth Kingdom palace.

She was able to redirect the flow of the lightning, split Azula’s fire and best the princess in an even match.

Only Iroh knows how to redirect lightning. It was something that he developed himself by studying the people of each nation. Since Azula is such a prodigy and everything, I'm going to have to say that your character couldn't have bested her in a match. o.O

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The other is an unmeltable ice flute that produces very high notes that are far too loud for a person to hear. These high notes are capable of splitting fire if played just right and at the right direction as it is the sound waves that causes the fire to split. The high tunes shatter glass and ice as well, but has little effect on water when in liquid or gas form.

Uhh, I don't think I'm really going to allow crazy items like these.

Ryuuk is capable of using four colors of fire. Red, black, white and blue. Red is the normal fire, which she only uses against lower level firebenders when she has to. Black is the fire that is so hot, it feels like ice. This is used to trap an enemy but not hurt them to the point where they can’t move afterwards. White is the hottest of her fires, it melts through glass, rock, turns sand into crystal, and cartelizes to prevent bleeding. This is rarely used as she cannot control it as well as the others. Her blue fire is much like Azula’s only not as devastating. Ryuuk uses her blue fire when she is cooking. Sounds simple enough, right? She also uses the blue fire to melt metal enough so she can craft things out of the steel blobs.

Only normal fire. Blue fire is the only other color and it's going to be reserved for Azula and the Firelord. Four different colors is just kind of ridiculous.

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Yeah, so that's about it. Can you fix these things up?